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[My water]

Hm.

Good animation, subtle sound... the allegory is a little confusing however, what you're saying is - a boy and a girl can only get their vitality back and begin sailing through life again by... sleeping together? :) And why are they sailing in girl's boat after sleeping together? Where have you ever seen that happen?

[Tall 'n Short]

Could be better

Good voice acting, but graphics are just slightly better than Clock Crew animations. Could use a little anti-aliasing and water reflection effects to enhance the imagery.

[Superfly: Bongzai!]

Do. You. Have. A. Canoe. I. Could. Borrow. Please?

Awesome, I miss those little guys. The shark part made me LOL. Then it got a little over the top as usual, but that's Joe Cartoon for you. Keep up the good job.

[There She Is!! step3]

As usual grat drawing style, but confusing...

The drawing and animation are once again superb, however I am a little confused with the story timeline here... I thought we were already through with the running away and chasing, and fighting bad bunnies and holding hands... why the backpedaling? Time for some fresh ideas.

[Can we have sex?]

So true...

I wish women would just let me do my thing and stop begging me for more sexings... great message, drawings could be a little more detailed IMHO.

Gate-keeper-girl responds:

I bet you're super popular.

Well.
The drawings are part of my animation style.
Simple, so I don't have to do a lot of "3D thinking"

And it's just a domestic scene, it's not like I'm going to give them meticulously designed lazer guns to point at eachother in an all-out battle to the glory of mankind.
It's just a short, people.

-GKG

[I hate MAC ads]

Ugh. It was allright I guess.

Not much for animation and sound but I guess it makes a point... sort of... personally, as much as I dislike Apple's marketing BS, I thought the movie lacked content to demonstrate it.

[Purse POWER]

Nice style, bizarre idea

I don't think I'll be the only one to day that this is probably the first time I've seen a fight scene with a purse in it... 5 for originality. I really can't suggest any areas for improvement, it's all around a good movie, keep it up.

ActiveObjectX responds:

heh, thanks

[Halo 3: Spartan Laser]

Short but true

Interesting style, although I would suggest running a shape optimizer on it a few times - would make it run smoother. Very true about the lazer - that gun is useless, especially in PvP. Although I'm not a big fan of FPS videogames on consoles (the controls are just mind-numbing), I enjoyed the movie. Definitely a keeper.

M4KBOT responds:

thanks bud.

[HIT THAT!]

Nice

Very funny and I love your animation style. Also I like the pre-loader, biggest numbers I've ever seen on one, seriously :) The only suggestion for improvement - consider making a "Replay" screen, with maybe "Hit that" noise when you mouse over or something... otherwise the ending is kind of awkward-looking. Awesome movie, keep up a good job.

[mario's short adventure]

Not bad, needs a pre-loader

I would strongly suggest adding a pre-loader to this movie as it paused playing on me half way through and I almost gave up on it. Once it did play through though, I got the impression that while you have not perfected your style yet, you did put alot of work into it and it deserves to pass the portal more than some of the other works I've seen do it. Keep up the good work and maybe try going for a more meaningful plot next time.

Bean49 responds:

thanks my second flash has a preloader and the one I am working on has one too